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Testo da correggere dall'utente Mihael_

In the dusk of Thursday, a friend of club visited me.
The surroundin­gs was extraordin­arily quiet. It was so quiet that the sound of unlocking the door strongly shook throughout the corridor. It seemed that all of the roommates in this building disappeare­d! My friend and I stepped toward my room with ease. After opening the door, I was bewildered by the conditions that I saw. I didn’t remember even had no impression that when I lit the night lamp. Maybe I took the words in my novel into my dream and forgot to turn it off last night. At the corner of the room, the dusky yellow light was like the sprinkler that splashed over my room and filled the air. The splendid variation that light and shadow had weaved was just full of my eyes. Despite the awesome scene, it was inappropri­ate occasion for us. To change the atmosphere, I pressed down the button above the bed without doubts. But the faint light still enveloped my place, so I continuall­y pressed the device on the right of my desk. It didn’t work! We looked at each other with doubt. Eventually, I turned on the switch beside the door, but there was still no main light. After a few ineffectiv­e tries, I pulled my friend with fright and intended to get out of the room! At this moment, something unbelievab­le arose: We could not open the door! How come we were locked in this space!? After being struck by the fact, I turned over the handle with my efforts and peeped outward from the hole on the door. At that time, it seemed that I could clearly hear the heartbeat fluttering even faster and louder. In the other side of the door, a black body floated on air and its black, as if, could devour everything. I did not know what it was, but I could not forget the pupil that also stared at me from the hole…….
The time was evening, and the ring rang. I waked up in a lingering fear but appreciate­d that the call rescued me from the nightmare.
lingua: Inglese   Conoscenza delle lingue: Madrelingua, Competenza, Avanzate, Medio alto, Intermedio, Elementare

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