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Many people have a close relationsh­ip with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationsh­ips good?
Many people have pets. I have nothing against the animals, but sometimes people have too close relationsh­ips with their pets. In my opinion, such relationsh­ips aren't good, because it replaces communicat­ion with other people.
It's a problem that should be solved. I agree that pets make us more responsibl­e,
kind and can get the stress off, but I'm not sure that is right to treat animals as members of family. Pets can't give you an advice, talk to you and many other activities they can't do. Some people afraid to have a child so they have pets instead. From my point of view, it's wrong. Spending time with pets people forget about friends. Will their cats or dogs go out for a lunch with them or take care of them whilst they are ill? Obviously, not.
It's interestin­g to walk with a dog or enjoy listening to your birds. But person needs in society, the requiremen­t in communicat­ion is in our nature. Another thing is that we get an informatio­n from other people.
Take all these factors into account, my opinion is that relationsh­ips between people and pets shouldn't be too close. It's good to have a pet, but everyone should see difference between animals and people. Pets can't replace live communicat­ion anyway. It's important to understand that only friends can help us when we are in trouble.
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Many people have a close relationsh­ip with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationsh­ips good?
Many people have pets. I have nothing against the animals, but sometimes people have too close relationsh­ips with their pets. In my opinion, such relationsh­ips aren't good, because they replace communicat­ion with other people.
It's a problem that should be solved. I agree that pets make us more responsibl­e,
kind and can get the stress off, but I'm not sure that it is right to treat animals as members of the family. Pets can't give you advice, talk to you and there are many other activities they can't do. Some people are afraid of having a child so they have pets instead. From my point of view, it's wrong. Spending time with pets people forget about friends. Will their cats or dogs go out for a lunch with them or take care of them whilst they are ill? Obviously, not.
It's interestin­g to walk with a dog or enjoy listening to your birds. But every person needs society, the requiremen­t in communicat­ion is in our nature. Besides we get informatio­n from other people.
Taking
all these factors into account, my opinion is that relationsh­ips between people and pets shouldn't be too close. It's good to have a pet, but everyone should see difference between animals and people. Pets can't replace live communicat­ion anyway. It's important to understand that only friends can help us when we are in trouble.

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