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With the rapid of technology, internet has become more and more popular these days. Some people argue that internet is useful in seeking information, other people disagree. Every coin has two sides, and internet is not exception.
Firstly, the benefits which internet bring for consumers. For a long time, people contacted together by writing latter, bird and soon. This way is not only slow but also inconvenient. However, in recent day, everything is easier. People contact with their family, their friends through Internet. Moreover, surfing information have become quick. There are many websites which useful namely google, coccoc, soon. Additionally, there are some websites which students can learn, example learning English. com, Math. com, IELTS. com.
The second, people are undeniable disadvantages of internet. Students play games instead of learning, so this influence to their study results. Furthermore, when people keep eyes glued to screen for several hours, it suffer their healthy. Example eye diseases, headache, obesity. Finally, everyone, especially young people, they spend all their times on watching any violent acts in the internet. Therefore, they have tendency to develop violent behavior.
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Firstly, the benefits which internet bring for consumers. For a long time, people contacted together by writing latter, bird and soon. This way is not only slow but also inconvenient. However, in recent day, everything is easier. People contact with their family, their friends through Internet. Moreover, surfing information have become quick. There are many websites which useful namely google, coccoc, soon. Additionally, there are some websites which students can learn, example learning English. com, Math. com, IELTS. com.
The second, people are undeniable disadvantages of internet. Students play games instead of learning, so this influence to their study results. Furthermore, when people keep eyes glued to screen for several hours, it suffer their healthy. Example eye diseases, headache, obesity. Finally, everyone, especially young people, they spend all their times on watching any violent acts in the internet. Therefore, they have tendency to develop violent behavior.
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Thanks to the invention and rapidity of technology, internet has become more and more popular these days. Some people argue that internet is useful for seeking information, other people disagree. Every coin has two sides, and internet is not an exception.
There certainly are benefits that the internet brings to people. For a long time, people got in touch by writing letters. Not only is this a slow mean, but it also is inconvenient. However, lately, everything is easier. People get in touch with their family and their friends through Internet. Moreover, surfing for informations has become easy. There are many useful websites like Google, Yahoo and so on. Additionally, there are some websites from which students can learn many things, like languages (e. g English. com, IELTS. com) or even maths (e. g Math. com).
However, people can be undeniably disadvantaged because of the internet. Students play games instead of studying, and this influences their performance at school. Furthermore, when people keep their eyes glued to a screen for several hours, it can affect their health. The consequences are eye diseases, headache, obesity and so on. Finally, everyone, especially young people, spend all of their time watching violent stuff such as movies, or playing violent games on the internet. Therefore, they have tendency to develope violent behavior.
There certainly are benefits that the internet brings to people. For a long time, people got in touch by writing letters. Not only is this a slow mean, but it also is inconvenient. However, lately, everything is easier. People get in touch with their family and their friends through Internet. Moreover, surfing for informations has become easy. There are many useful websites like Google, Yahoo and so on. Additionally, there are some websites from which students can learn many things, like languages (e. g English. com, IELTS. com) or even maths (e. g Math. com).
However, people can be undeniably disadvantaged because of the internet. Students play games instead of studying, and this influences their performance at school. Furthermore, when people keep their eyes glued to a screen for several hours, it can affect their health. The consequences are eye diseases, headache, obesity and so on. Finally, everyone, especially young people, spend all of their time watching violent stuff such as movies, or playing violent games on the internet. Therefore, they have tendency to develope violent behavior.
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